Thursday, 25 June 2020

PARTY Acrostic Poem

This is an acrostic poem using PARTY for Coleen's birthday party! While I was making this on Google Docs I learnt that an Acrostic Poem is a poem where certain letters in each line spell out a word. Are you sad about Boy in the Girl's Bathroom ending? Comment and tell me what you think. Blog you later!
Pin the tail on the donkey, It’s lots of fun!

At parties you eat cake and play games
Racing and running, seeing who will come first!
Tasting and eating lots of cake
Yes! Goody bags! Now I have to go home. ):
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8 comments:

  1. Megan Judd29 June 2020 at 21:23

    Hi William, I like your R line - the words 'racing and running' help me imagine everyone moving quickly during their race. Perhaps you could have added some adjectives to make your poem even more interesting. How could you describe the cake and the games? bye : )

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    1. Anonymous2 July 2020 at 10:43

      Hi Mrs. Judd,may be I could use adverbs to describes the games? What do you think about that. Blog you later!

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  2. Phil @ Ako Hiko30 June 2020 at 18:21

    Awesome acrostic poem William! I like how the end of your poem matched the end of the party.

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    1. Anonymous2 July 2020 at 10:42

      Thank you Phil, is there anything you think I could do better next time?

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    2. Phil @ Ako Hiko2 July 2020 at 10:45

      Maybe you could try a different type of poem? Or maybe do a screencast of your performing your poem?

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  4. Anonymous2 July 2020 at 14:26

    Hi William,

    I like your Acrostic Poem I have done a Acrostic poem too! And I don't like party that end's too!

    Do reply back from Jia.

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    1. Anonymous2 July 2020 at 16:35

      Hi Jia, I will check out your acrostic poem on your blog. I agree with you, I don't like party's that end either. Blog you later!

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