In class we have been working on similies/metaphors. In writing we had to use ethier a similie or a metaphor. This is my favourite piece of writing this week.
The boy was wondering slowly and carefully when he nearly fell off a tall, creepy bridge. It was as scary as a lion jumping at you.
Hi my name is Teddy and I really like your blog post about your writing because it has a simile in it. Next time you could describe the trees.
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Hi Teddy, thank you for the comment. Next time I will try to describe the trees or somethingb else. Blog you later!
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