This is a comment that I did for SLG. I think mine is very good because I wrote a PTHQ comment, I commented on Ruby's blog and here is a screenshot of it. Blog you later!
Kia ora William, my name is Elle and I’m from the Summer Learning Journey.
This is an awesome example of a positive, thoughtful and helpful comment - well done! I really like that you’ve introduced yourself and let Ruby know that you enjoyed her post; I’m sure she really appreciated that! I also really like that you gave her some advice and asked some questions. This is a great way to start a comment thread, because when they reply, you can have a back and forth conversation about the topic!
For next time, it would be awesome if you included a link to Ruby’s blog, so that we can see the post you commented on and the work that they’ve done. Otherwise, great job!
Tino pai tō mahi e hoa! I have included a link to the Summer Learning Journey blog here so that you can see the 2020/2021 activities that you will need to complete in order to be eligible to receive points and win prizes. It would be great to see you doing more of these activities, because you did such a great job on this one!
Keep up the great work and I look forward to seeing what you post next!
Kia ora William, my name is Elle and I’m from the Summer Learning Journey.
ReplyDeleteThis is an awesome example of a positive, thoughtful and helpful comment - well done! I really like that you’ve introduced yourself and let Ruby know that you enjoyed her post; I’m sure she really appreciated that! I also really like that you gave her some advice and asked some questions. This is a great way to start a comment thread, because when they reply, you can have a back and forth conversation about the topic!
For next time, it would be awesome if you included a link to Ruby’s blog, so that we can see the post you commented on and the work that they’ve done. Otherwise, great job!
Tino pai tō mahi e hoa! I have included a link to the Summer Learning Journey blog here so that you can see the 2020/2021 activities that you will need to complete in order to be eligible to receive points and win prizes. It would be great to see you doing more of these activities, because you did such a great job on this one!
Keep up the great work and I look forward to seeing what you post next!
Mā te wā
Elle (SLJ)
Thatnk you Elle, I will include the post next time.
DeleteBlog you later!