Today we had to plan out a story on one of the Auckland volcanoes and then write the story, kind of similar to the newspaper volcano slides we did. The story wa hard to get an idea of but once I did it was super fun to write. I'm going to ask another random question, do you have a favourite sport and if you do what is it? Blog you later!
Hi William
ReplyDeleteI'm glad to hear you enjoyed your writing. As I read it I imagined standing at the top of Mt Eden/Manugawhau and looking down in to the deep crater. I wouldn't like to fall like Grandad did in your story.
Favourite sport....I am more of a spectator than player and I love watching my kids play hockey.
I've seen someone fall into Mt Eden! It was a high school kid who tried to run down the crater at full speed. He fell near the bottom, sliding through the vicious scoria at the bottom. You have certainly followed the Success Criteria - well done. I think this story could be expanded into a full adventure story easily. Great job!
ReplyDeleteHi william
ReplyDeletemy class did the same thing.
bolg you later phoenix