Today I have been learning to make up a newsaper and doing the order of the writing in the right place, like the most important in the first paragraph and the least important in the last paragraph. We had to make up a story about on of the Auckland Volcanoes and I think mine was a pretty fun idea. What is your local volcano? Blog you later!
Wow! What fantastic language you have used in this! I like how you have involved the government. I am wondering what will happen next. This sounds like the start of an exciting story!
ReplyDeleteKia Ora William,
ReplyDeleteI agree that the first paragraph is the most important as it hooks you in to read more. I liked how you wrote that Mount Eden is now closed for six months, and then had a link where you could read more if you wanted to. Great work!
Hi William, Great choice of words...volcanologist, toxic ...I can imagine that you had fun writing this interesting piece. Great work!
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