Last week our class made a hundred word story. It wasreally fun to make, we had to delete quite a lot becasue 100 words is very short. Here is my story, hope you enjoy it. Blog you later!
Henry is busy playing video games when he hears his grandma call “Dinner love!”. He replies by saying “Be quiet grandma, I’m trying to finish this game!!!”. “Come after that.” He walks to dinner when Grandma says “Cabbage stew, again!” “I hate cabbage stew!” says the boy rudely. His grandma is filled with anger, she transforms into a zombie, the boy is petrified and screams in terror as he runs away. The grandma hops in the car viciously. She drives like a racecar and runs him over. “Don’t you dare ever critizize my Cabbage soup, '' The grandma says with anger.
Gidday William I really like your story because it has names and a lot of vocab.
ReplyDeleteWhat was your favourite part to write about this story?
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Angus
Gidday Angus, this is a good comment. My favourite part is probably when the grandma turns into a zombie. Blog you later Angus!
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